I might have to change the title. Help me choose.
Your Brother's Religion (Extended Demo) ยป Devlog
Hi,
I may have made a poll about this already, but I need more feedback. Please take a moment to tell me what I should rename my game to. When I do change it, please keep an eye out for its new title.
I'm assuming my games titles is too offensive and that's why my game keeps getting removed. When I wrote the title, I felt like it would be pretty offensive. This whole story could trigger a bunch of people and that's why there's a content warning, please read it carefully. So here are some more alt titles I came up with. The poll
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Your Brother's Religion (Extended Demo)
A fantasy experience: temptations, cults, curses, and the battle of oblivion
Status | In development |
Author | beastcarving |
Genre | Visual Novel, Interactive Fiction |
Tags | Dating Sim, Fantasy, Horror, LGBT, Life Simulation, Otome, Romance |
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I'm sorry to hear the inconvenience you have to go through as the risk of mild controversial content in the game, it will be another lesson for us fellow developers. As I don't use Patreon, so I'll comment here.
I like the one with "A Silhouette of His Skin", rather than the other more revealing alternative title (kinda spoiler to the story). The other easier option in my mind is to only slightly change the considered offensive part of the title (in which I bet it was the religion). It has some synonyms that could still work with "Your Brother's...", such as "faith", "doctrine", "beliefs", "creed", "pursuit", even "obsession".
Ah! Thanks for the feedback. Using a synonym is a really good idea. Obsession is an equally strong word, I might consider using that or A Silhouette of His Skin. Again, thanks for the response.